A Striptease Comments
The daughter of ocean is now in her teens,
On the top of a tree I see her preens,
Sweetheart, nature has taught you to fly,
Spread your wings, for the naughty sky,
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So creative with your great imagination you take the reader on an amazing journey of sheer freedom of nature's dance! Original and great write!
Very very imaginative write.... the parched Earth is thirsting for the kiss of rain! Let the vapour from the ocean rise up sky high and, cool down and pour out in dancing movements, stripe teasing! Am I right in my interprtation?
You know and the readers know that Stripe Tease is dance in which the dancer removes the pieces of her dress one by one and throws it on the watchers. I have imagined the clouds throwing her beauty of rains one by one on the earth. Your interpretation is correct. Thanks for the comment. But you don't know and most of the readers don't know that here at Karachi the entire electrical installations are stale and as soon as it rains the supply of electricity is immediately stopped. So i have imagined the clouds as a dancer who when throws showers, immediately it is dark.
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7/27/2025 7:29:00 AM # 1.0.0
ok, good! you corrected stripetease to striptease! :)