Monday, April 16, 2007

A String Of Simile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Words bind me, wrapping around me like vines
And like vines they grow, and constrict, like a boa
And like a boa they hiss in my ear, the most wonderful things.
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Sophia White
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Kesav Easwaran 16 April 2008

words cascading up and along...beautifully...

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Landrey 29 April 2007

yes, echo echo, very good. creative Idea and you made it soar. -landrey

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R. S. Farris 17 April 2007

your rhythms are particularly good in this one!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 16 April 2007

A String of Simile-an apt title for a wonderful poem. The words flow like a simphony and sound musical to my ears

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Raymond Wright 16 April 2007

Absolutely stunning, Sophia! ~Ray

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