A Stream Comments

Great piece bro...you'll get a lot of response to this my man....definitely worth more than '10' Keep'm coming bro... Clean Dishes Jon

conscious stream, absolute control on stream of matter; ‘we run on habitual pessimism’ blatant truth in eloquent lines, a very good write

Without negative feedback we would all be dead... it is the balance redirect of nature... may your life stream be filled more with confluence than times of empheral dryness... aroha

Like the new twist given to the first line. I agree with the inbetween and, for some reason, the last part fits in perfectly. I’m throwing it away. This stream Is built on water flowing. So we start another day....

Hello David my friend. Hope you had a pleasant weekednd. What a thought provoking poem on thoughts. Good way with words my friend, I enjoyed. Loyd

Each new day is a gift and well worth living. Strength for the journey, David. For a fine wordsmith, such as yourself, life is filled with creative adventures. Warmest regards, Sandra

Your poem has powerful spiritual insights as well as being an imaginative exploration of both personal and universal angst. Like an impressionistic painting, you ask the reader to smudge the eyes in order to reveal the whole image. Another interesting poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

a new perspective on things. i like. run with it. oh well swim against that current buddy.

a stream of misconception flowing unhesitantly towards a stream of hope.........hope that vanished into another branches of stream........a very peculiar abstract write. best regards, Sulaiman

Yes many times out of nothing we feel in the same manner as you have expressed, frustration, pessimism creep in as an inevitable part of our stream of consciousness. Such alternate phases make a life.. Well expressed in poetic lines… Abha

Lovely approach with this bro, to feel that we belong is a path to finding the soul held within ourselves...you've caught this beautifully, great piece bro. Best wishes *10* Jon.

A strong metaphor here David that blends your own stream of consciousness with that of life's race - a clever blending of mindscape and landscape. There is a clarity of thought that runs through this reflective piece which carries with it your distinctive hallmark of perception. justine.

David, excellent penning by you, it flows like a stream and is quite deep and thought provoking,10, Lynda xx