Friday, June 5, 2009

A Stream Flows Comments

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Small boys, locked in a hopeful dream,
throw hapless stones into a stream -
resulting ripples may protect
the dream, until they intersect,
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Rory Hudson
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James James 23 June 2009

Loved this. Flows like the Murray, Ripples like the Onkaparinga. Carries the reader wistfully along.

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Caybin Sturgess 05 June 2009

wow this is really good i can picture it all soo well like the flowing of the stream into the river and great medaphor the whole poem is :)

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Rory Hudson

Rory Hudson

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