A Stream -01 Comments
Far off the distant hill-
Flows zigzag down and down,
Slows en route, its journey below,
Humps obstruct her, feeble flow.
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assion builds, limbs swell, Bubbles form, snowy, small, Jumps into her mother's lap, Down, below, river's splash. Thanks for Sharing...10+++++
Yes I agree with you Paresh, it's a beautifully written poem.
Pours upon, drop by drop Like a cricket's infant hop, Meadows flower, bathes grass, Meets the river, with a splash This theme is really very beautiful. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.....10++++
Yes I agree with you Biswa, it's a beautifully written poem.
Wow! ! ! ! what a beautiful full poem.thanks for sharing.....10++++
Passion builds, limbs swell, Bubbles form, snowy, small, Jumps into her mother's lap, Down, below, river's splash A beautiful theme on the story of a stream meeting the river, its mother with deep passion. 10++++
Passion builds, limbs swell, Bubbles form, snowy, small, Jumps into her mother's lap, Down, below, river's splash.lovely stanza shairing.i agree with you
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7/18/2025 2:38:26 PM # 1.0.0
Passion builds, limbs swell, Bubbles form, snowy, small, Jumps into her mother's lap, Down, below, river's splash. -A beautiful poem with nice photography! Thanks for sharing....10
Thanks for your lovely comment..