Thursday, February 26, 2009

A Streak Of Light Comments

Rating: ★3.8

Close to the east window in the blanket of darkness I sit
My heart throbbing with expectancy: when can I see it?
A glance into the darkness I throw
But darkness all around I see
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Obed Akuma
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~ Jon London ~ 11 March 2009

A few mistakes, but other than that, a great visual write, well done 8

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Gordon Wilkinson 11 March 2009

It sort of jumps a bit and one or two words dont quite fit - 7

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Obed Akuma

Obed Akuma

Nyamira County, Kenya
Obed Akuma
Obed Akuma
Nyamira County, Kenya
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