Sunday, May 13, 2007

A Stranger Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes we feel defeated,
we’ve lost the will to fight,
we are about to give up,
and never make a stand.
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David Harris
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David Barlow 27 July 2007

This is a great piece of writing David. I would like to think I have helped someone in that situation but who knows. You can only offer friendship, support and understanding when someone is that low. Thank you for sharing this one. All the best, David

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purple moon 04 July 2007

very nice, i could do with that strangers help at this moment in time, but that's another story! ...........well done.x

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Melvina Germain 26 May 2007

Angels are always there and speak to us in quiet soft voices too, all we have to do is learn to listen to the whispers. Beautiful poem David, a pleasure to read. Thankyou David--Melvina--

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Lisa Wilkinson 24 May 2007

We all have a guardian Angel, some of us have a few, they follow us through our travels, protecting what we do. x

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D, thank you for pointing this out to me and yes, as you know, I can relate; wonderfully penned and straight into head and heart. t x

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Pam Thomas 16 May 2007

God says to be kind to strangers because they may be Angels. I think that there are Angels walking among us and like you said David all we have to do is reach out and take there hand. Loved it David! Big 10 from me. XOXO Pam

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Duncan Wyllie 15 May 2007

I love poems such as these, they offer so much hope, a way forward in our thinking Top marks David Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 14 May 2007

This beautiful poem is filled with wisdom and light. A simply expressed tale about trust and compassion. Warmly, Allie xxxx

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JoAnn McGrath 14 May 2007

My stranger does have a name: O) ....and I thank him for pulling me through...beautiful write David...brought tears to my eyes: O)

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How true, many times it has been a stranger coming out of nowhere that has reached into my life and made a difference! Very true words shared in this poem.It has a Great message and EXCELLENT imagery from beginning to end. U have so much talent and ability to write it is no wonder you have been published.... Thanx so much for sharing David..... ((Smile)) ten out of 10! =Shelley=

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 May 2007

So True again, Oh wise sage.. Its amazing how many times your at your lowest ebb, when out of the blue some one comes out of no where, picks you brushes you down... maybe they are sent by god..?

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Caroline Morton 13 May 2007

very thought provoking and true. Been in that situation, and oh, so true

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