Tuesday, October 20, 2009

A Stranger On The Shore Comments

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The waves rush up around my feet
from an early morning tide.
Seagulls bob up and down
resting on the water
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David Harris
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Duncan Wyllie 23 October 2009

I love this David, , and look! ! ! you wrote this one on my birthday, , makes it all the more special, , Thankyou for sharing yet another moving piece Love duncan X

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Patti Masterman 20 October 2009

What a gift to see the sea each morning (and be able to write a poem about it, if you pleased to) . I finally understand why I have spent my whole life distant from the sea; it is because I would never have gotten a single thing done; with that irresistible siren calling me day and night. Thanks for the splendid vision.

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Carol Gall 20 October 2009

i would love to be there 10

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Ernestine Northover 20 October 2009

I can picture you silhouetted against the sunrise looking out on a vast ocean all alone, with maybe a palm tree or two, what do you think? Sounds a romantic setting, so I'm sorry to find you alone. Nice read, thoughtful piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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