Monday, August 18, 2008

A Stranger In The Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.8

Who are you & where did I go
Where is the girl I used to know
Who is this woman staring back at me
Who are you, where could I be
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venom 13 January 2020

it is so good, it even soothes my soul

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Min sia 05 January 2018

Good it isvery good

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Rakesh Bedi 15 October 2009

unacceptibility of the poet of the Present is quite evident in this poem..... the best thing i liked is the poet's desire to be young ever......thanks, dear....

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Allan Macli Borges 13 June 2009

excepcional writing... a lifetime is too short to spend in vain, so when you live to write such beautiful pieces you do have nothing to regret, i sure.

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Ian Bowen 06 March 2009

Tia, please believe that there are men out there that love mature women. Lines on ones face are maps of experience. Be proud of the life you have lived, and make the best of what remains. I love you anyway. Ian

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Thad Wilk 29 November 2008

There's an inner beauty here also that reflects an projects an image true, that no mirror could ever - give justice to! *10*! Best wishes Tia, a pleasure to read! Friend Thad

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Min Sia 09 November 2008

Reflection tells nothing but truth..yet it is us who denies. This poem flows clearly. A 10! !

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Michael Shepherd 01 November 2008

God, inventing mirrors, said, they won't like what they see... they'll only find the truth within - their truth so dear to Me..

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Tj Becker 19 September 2008

haha I think my mom just uttered the same words not just yesterday. Wonderful flow and rhyme. Your poems are great. I'm glad I have the opportunity to read them.

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Junior Pocoloco 28 August 2008

Your poem remindid me of my Grandmother telling me that she felt like she was still a kid and always wondered who that old lady looking back at her was. Nice poem.

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Tanya Stanford 28 August 2008

I look at the mirror the same way. You just put it better then I ever could have. Lovely composition Tia

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Nkululeko Mdudu 28 August 2008

I can't say I'm familia with the sight, though I do so mkiss the days when I was 'cute, free and curious', now i'm little more than work, study and sleep; and at such a young age! beautiful poem T.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 25 August 2008

Hello Tia. I enjoyed thispoem and it is alarming when we finally stop and see ourself and who we have become. Very good. Please see my similar poem 'Reality' Thanks again, Loyd

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Andrew Blakemore 22 August 2008

A lovely poem Tia, unfortunately time catches up with everybody. Best wishes, Andrew

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 20 August 2008

Searching self in the mirror good imagery.........

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Kris Smith 20 August 2008

Ok Tia this is what you do. Stand in front of the mirror and say, mirror, mirror on the wall who is the fairest of them all, and the mirror says you are Tia without a doubt, you say thankyou mirror over out, great poem 10 Chris

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Tom Balch 20 August 2008

You didnt go anywhere you are still you, great poem 10+

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Ian Bowen 19 August 2008

Tia, I see you have the same kind of mirrors in S.Africa as we have in the UK. I am sure however, that you have people who love every single line; caused by the experience of life. Love the poem.10/10 Ian

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