Friday, July 1, 2016

A Stranger Comments

Rating: 5.0

A stranger wid a studious luk
A specs, A beard, And a serious face
So Intelligent bt nvr had a buk
so calm and quite in evry case
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Aditi Garg
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Kelly Kurt 02 July 2016

I agree with Subhas. Keep writing, Aditi

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 July 2016

She Got Irritated for mostly he ws quite... Though he truely loved her She left her inspite.. It would have a great impression at the first read like the love at the first sight, had you taken a little pain of typing the full words, in stead you loved to use the SMS format. Of course you have full liberty of giving any kind of distortion to your personal creation. Still it hurts. A beautiful daughter behind an ugly mask. However I loved the essence of this great poem. Please do not feel hurt for my comments.10 for the poem. Subhas.

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Aditi Garg 01 July 2016

Thank you sir your comment matters a lot

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