Thursday, January 16, 2014

A Strange Peddler Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm a strange street peddler,
vending my variety of goods
I do sell my collections -
By roaming in the streets and lanes.
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Amitava Sur
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 April 2015

A creative poem on time written in a unique way mind blowing on the personification. Kudos. Great to read u again.

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Roseann Shawiak 09 October 2014

Very puzzling until the end when you revealed yourself the peddler of time! Great imagery, a dramatic ending to a wonderful poem. Once I knew it was time doing the peddling, everything fell into place. Smart, ingenious a mystery poem in it's beginning, the ending blooming into a realization of what you were referring to! Thank you, Amitava, another interesting and thought provoking poem! ! Love it! RoseAnn

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Patricia Grantham 25 March 2014

A very beautiful and thoughtfully written poem. Time has all the power, goods and values. No one can control it. It goes about stealing and peddling whatever it can. Use it wisely. Very inspiring indeed.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 March 2014

Time the peddler selling all emotions and feelings. Beautiful poem with nice expressions. Thank you.

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Shahzia Batool 20 January 2014

Your poems have poetic merits especially the personification, imagery, and dramatic elements! a deep poem about time!

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Rubab Atwal 19 January 2014

a very engrossing and thoughtful write...enjoyed it

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Valsa George 17 January 2014

Till the end, I had no clue of who that strange hawker was! ! A very interesting and meaningful write on Time, Amitava! ! Enjoyed! !

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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