A Strange Night Comments
it was a half moon
and the somber sky
yawned, with no other lights;
and a hunchback-cloud came close
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LOL, I love the monstrous vision conjured up by the cloud. I have always considered it my curse to see plotting humans and ranging monsters in every pattern I happen to glance at. But maybe it's not such a bad thing after all..(smile)
Great imagery...I agree with Roshni, it will be difficult to gaze at teh half moon without recalling your poem...
Brilliant image...although, I'm not sure I will be able to look at a half moon in the same way again!
Wow, now i know what metaphor can do to the imagery of a poem. Its awesome. Thank you for sharing :)
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7/23/2025 3:16:25 PM # 1.0.0
raj, you've showed us that strange night beautifully. good write.