A Strange Dream Comments

Relieved though, To be back to my world, Still was in an stupor, Realizing how much I held my world to my heart! ! ! dreams are not real but still they are so close to our chest. sometimes taking us to its logical conclusionthhought not enter in our life really....10 read mine..pulled from deep sleep.....o lord.... dreams not come true

Relieved though, To be back to my world, Still was in an stupor, Realizing how much I held my world to my heart! ! ! dreams are always strange but the you gone through is wonderful and ipressive in poem for and i agree with your conclusion up..10++++++++++++

Very original and thought-provoking and really Dreamy.Thanks for sharing your work.10 Best wishes. A.

googd poem and well writen. your an artist keep it up

best of your best winnie.........creativity and poetic rhyme dances in your lines.........the 4th and 5th para was simply awesome....te way yu kept the one who tried to pursue yu... secret, till te end was adorable...............10+ sebastine

Wow this is neat! ! I like it so much.. You wrote this very nicely.. KRISTA