~~a Strange Commitment! ! Comments
Amongst the distorted shadows in this moonlight
There is one, that waits for me
Every nite, m here on the terrace to see
If this strange commitment isnt decieved
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A truly wonderful poem. Excellent thoughts and great composition. Loved reading it. Thank you very much.
Nice! Reminds me of old Japanese love poems, except yours also has a rhyme to it. Beautiful.
What simplicity and warmth this poem had. a feeling of familiarity yet the unknown. This was original and creative. I so enjoyed the read
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7/24/2025 8:34:44 PM # 1.0.0
read this once again today. u r awesome princess. what a write! thanks.