Friday, October 24, 2008

~~a Strange Commitment! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Amongst the distorted shadows in this moonlight
There is one, that waits for me
Every nite, m here on the terrace to see
If this strange commitment isnt decieved
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POOJA LADYLUCK
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 16 April 2009

read this once again today. u r awesome princess. what a write! thanks.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 25 October 2008

A truly wonderful poem. Excellent thoughts and great composition. Loved reading it. Thank you very much.

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Stefan Stokes 24 October 2008

Nice! Reminds me of old Japanese love poems, except yours also has a rhyme to it. Beautiful.

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Tj Becker 24 October 2008

What simplicity and warmth this poem had. a feeling of familiarity yet the unknown. This was original and creative. I so enjoyed the read

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