A Story Untold Comments

The story of love goes on, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,10

And isn't love just wonderful. I did enjoy your story and hope that your love never does end. Irene

what a lovely poem indeed.: ] well done.

'Love after the loving always seems to become complicated, there are too many obsticles to get distracted from' A very beautiful poem. The last stanza is excellent. My love for it with 10.

a story untold...a love story very well you unfold...good piece 10

Beautiful wonderful piece you have here. So wonderfully told a story of love.

Bonnie, This is a poetic feast for the mind, heart, & soul - your poems are always fresh & alive... thanks for sharing your uncompromising talent with us! Best regards, Robert

I'd change the name of this piece to A Story Told as you told it spectacularly! **10** Be Well, Nate

its a very nice poem..words chosen very articulately..keep writing! !

a very beautiful piece of poetry

I read it the first time, and the poem brought to me the image of The Notebook I read it the second time, and I could only dwell on the lines, Rather than rationalize the importance of what mistakes each of us would regret for a lifetime, seemed rather non existant How appealing a poem is this

A beautiful poem and presentation. Thanks

Thanks and this was a very nice. LC

Yet another beautiful piece Bonnie. Really enjoyed. Regards. Craig.

A captivating poem from the first word to the last. Excellent! Andrew '10'