*** A Story Untold Yet *** Comments
there lie many a rungs of colors
the ascension yet onto the moon
on the strands of love blustering
clouds when all around intoning blue
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a beautiful poetry relating life and nature nicely written
Zest of life, being in love Caught in a cool breeze Or an untimely shower. Is there something lost in a fire frame? What about those tune of desires rocked up? So is it the confusion about love and hate? Dear poet, this love-hate relation Mostly yeild an untold story. You made me thinking and thinking... Enjoyed the sense of that 'Untold'. Thank you.
Deep thoughts to ponder with...story untold yet, heritage will bring our name to life and remain in their hearts forever for thats the seed we planted during our times
Excellent use of imagery and metaphor. Our story is indeed untold as yet. But each new day is a gift and well worth living. Warmest regards, Sandra
A truly inspirering and captivating story, showing grace in poetic style. thanks
A capturing poem and story, poignant and thought provoking! *10*! ! Best regards Dr. Kar! Friend Thad
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8/8/2025 4:05:45 AM # 1.0.0
...a truely poetic composition......10