Monday, August 16, 2010

A Story Of The Rising Butterfly / Underneath My Chrysalis Comments

Rating: 4.2

Laying on the green leaf, left and abandoned
Be a caterpillar, never easy as u thought
Hated, oppressed are common, love is rarely brought
With friends, everywhere is like home, strong without bone
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 July 2018

This poem bears positive thought and positive love through a rising butterfly intensively. The inscription is touching and amusing with a nice theme. I want to quote some lines here......... Thanks to hater for hate instead of love Because hate is hidden behind the love In life composed of varies friends or foe Respect them for perfectly play their roles Thanks for sharing for this gem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 December 2016

Cheering. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Simone Inez Harriman 03 March 2016

I love your poem Soul. Dreams are so important to help one fly to immense heights....10

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Frank James Davis 07 April 2013

Your poetry has dimension because you examine a subject from many angles. Like most of your work, Soul, this is a superior offering.

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Kanav Justa 29 December 2012

Your emotions too flow like a butterfly.... so much time in this poem i was filled with lots of positive energy.... story of a cattrplr to buttrfly... very encouraging

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Tony Karas 12 December 2012

Totally beautiful with so many hinted at lessons. Just leave out your depression..... if only it were that simple.

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Ruby Honeytip 21 November 2012

Just mesmerising, fantastic, multi-layered work.....Wow! ! This makes me wonder what your process is. Midnights Voice's poetry flows freely, and quickly I am told, from his spirit to his pen. Is it the same for you I wonder?

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Valsa George 04 November 2012

Beautiful message! With positive thoughts, we can scale great heights and love is the antidote to all maladies of the world! This poem will certainly remain as a source of inspiration to many!

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 16 July 2012

i liked the very energetic texture of this poem......loved it! !

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Neela Nath Das 04 May 2012

Here in this poem the central metaphor is the rising butterfly.Great thought and nice representation.

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Dead Leaf 06 April 2012

I DON'T KNOW MORE WORDS TO DESCRIBE THIS GREAT POEM...AMAZING POEM... TOPMARKS.........

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Willie Walker 20 February 2012

Each soul is a chrysalis, waiting for a kind word or deed to start the process of making the world a more beautiful place. You seem to be one of the folk who like to start the process. Thanks fo the wonderful read. willie

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Vipins Puthooran 09 February 2012

[metamorphosis of mind] Excellent metaphors and imageries! Elegant writing Amazin poem! ! ! really deserves 100/100

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Harindhar Reddy 10 November 2011

Awe-inspiring poem with name of butterfly you flew to whole universe I mean human universe. You sprinkled message everywhere. Lot ideas are generated are you a diamond mine in South Africa. 'Thousand miles traveled, your wound now healed Thousands flowers to meet, million pollens to breed' Your mind dug in deep and explored every leave. Great keep it up. Good show with some glow like glow worm. Take this sent by garland to adorn you!

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M Davis 25 October 2011

Amazing, beautiful indeed. I got caught up in it right away!

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Kamel kamel 20 October 2011

'With friends, everywhere is like home, strong without bone ' nice poem

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Bernard Snyder 10 October 2011

Articulately written 'piece' here as well. It is truly amazing how we can take the negative people around us and write something so positive! Awesome, and thanks for sharing!

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 August 2011

The best imageries are written here from unwritten soul.They play in the portrait elucidated here.A great art and articulation here.

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Terence George Craddock 19 September 2010

'Revolution mind trigger real evolution Wrapped in chrysalis, carrying seed of ambition Confidence is a key, frustration is motivation Follow intuition, hunt for pride redemption Just leave out your depression...' Deliverance Through Life Choices all clay is supposed to transcend life plane prison all bodies are supposed to chrysalis seek vision all souls are potential butterfly in quest transition all hearts sincere evolve in purity light to home heaven all flesh must conflict mortality fail experience leaven all fermentation flesh to brain enlivens spirit revelation all divine will is truth hidden secret purpose is salvation Inspired by the poem ‘Underneath My Chrysalis’ by Unwritten Soul. Copyright © Terence George Craddock

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