A Story Of The Rising Butterfly / Underneath My Chrysalis Comments

This poem bears positive thought and positive love through a rising butterfly intensively. The inscription is touching and amusing with a nice theme. I want to quote some lines here......... Thanks to hater for hate instead of love Because hate is hidden behind the love In life composed of varies friends or foe Respect them for perfectly play their roles Thanks for sharing for this gem.

Cheering. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I love your poem Soul. Dreams are so important to help one fly to immense heights....10

Your poetry has dimension because you examine a subject from many angles. Like most of your work, Soul, this is a superior offering.

Your emotions too flow like a butterfly.... so much time in this poem i was filled with lots of positive energy.... story of a cattrplr to buttrfly... very encouraging

Totally beautiful with so many hinted at lessons. Just leave out your depression..... if only it were that simple.

Just mesmerising, fantastic, multi-layered work.....Wow! ! This makes me wonder what your process is. Midnights Voice's poetry flows freely, and quickly I am told, from his spirit to his pen. Is it the same for you I wonder?

Beautiful message! With positive thoughts, we can scale great heights and love is the antidote to all maladies of the world! This poem will certainly remain as a source of inspiration to many!

i liked the very energetic texture of this poem......loved it! !

Here in this poem the central metaphor is the rising butterfly.Great thought and nice representation.

I DON'T KNOW MORE WORDS TO DESCRIBE THIS GREAT POEM...AMAZING POEM... TOPMARKS.........

Each soul is a chrysalis, waiting for a kind word or deed to start the process of making the world a more beautiful place. You seem to be one of the folk who like to start the process. Thanks fo the wonderful read. willie

[metamorphosis of mind] Excellent metaphors and imageries! Elegant writing Amazin poem! ! ! really deserves 100/100

Awe-inspiring poem with name of butterfly you flew to whole universe I mean human universe. You sprinkled message everywhere. Lot ideas are generated are you a diamond mine in South Africa. 'Thousand miles traveled, your wound now healed Thousands flowers to meet, million pollens to breed' Your mind dug in deep and explored every leave. Great keep it up. Good show with some glow like glow worm. Take this sent by garland to adorn you!

Amazing, beautiful indeed. I got caught up in it right away!

'With friends, everywhere is like home, strong without bone ' nice poem

Articulately written 'piece' here as well. It is truly amazing how we can take the negative people around us and write something so positive! Awesome, and thanks for sharing!

The best imageries are written here from unwritten soul.They play in the portrait elucidated here.A great art and articulation here.

'Revolution mind trigger real evolution Wrapped in chrysalis, carrying seed of ambition Confidence is a key, frustration is motivation Follow intuition, hunt for pride redemption Just leave out your depression...' Deliverance Through Life Choices all clay is supposed to transcend life plane prison all bodies are supposed to chrysalis seek vision all souls are potential butterfly in quest transition all hearts sincere evolve in purity light to home heaven all flesh must conflict mortality fail experience leaven all fermentation flesh to brain enlivens spirit revelation all divine will is truth hidden secret purpose is salvation Inspired by the poem ‘Underneath My Chrysalis’ by Unwritten Soul. Copyright © Terence George Craddock