A Story Of Love Comments

I like how you define two sides of border- - to cross or not to cross- - the faith and doubt- - - while heart says 'yes', mind says 'no'- - - -Yes, it is love and life.

I never knew falling in love could be so beautiful...your poem just made me believe that. Superb. A big 10.

Yes, please come back to the real world Daniel.10

Along the edge of the forest you met her and emotion was brought up through this. New existence was like childish. Eyes saw beauty of each other. On that green corridor to live together promises were made. This was really wonderful moment of love and this was very memorable. Excellently penned poem is shared here....10