Thursday, April 16, 2009

A Story Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

The life that we live
is just one big story
it has many climaxs
and many reasons
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Patricia Wiley
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Ndeye Aissa thiam 29 July 2022

A good story I really appreciate your poems and it make me know more about life and I am in good love with your story

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 April 2009

What wisdom. I thought you were very young, but that piece of writing was filled with a wisdom born of age. You are either a genius or a very great soul that has a lot to give to the world. And the structure and presentation were just what they needed to be. All praise to you my dear. GW62

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Eyan Desir 21 April 2009

So true and so sweet

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Ultimate X 21 April 2009

i its good.....................

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Muhammad Ali 20 April 2009

Nice thoughts and good flow friend! Well done and keep it up 10/10 :)

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sky dreams 16 April 2009

i love the meaning behind this poem.. if i could give some humble advice though, i would say to maybe try to make it more metaphorical by having the 'life' do the actions.. so like from 'a story that has been told' to a story that tells itself, or remains untold... or 'sometimes it gets turned around and then other times its just like a flow' to sometimes it turns itself around while other time it likes to just flow.... but that's just me and not everyone thinks the same, but i do love this poem great job!

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James Mclain 16 April 2009

A good story this story of life you tell to fold unfold and grows less strife..thank you..iip

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