A Story Of Life Comments

A good story I really appreciate your poems and it make me know more about life and I am in good love with your story

What wisdom. I thought you were very young, but that piece of writing was filled with a wisdom born of age. You are either a genius or a very great soul that has a lot to give to the world. And the structure and presentation were just what they needed to be. All praise to you my dear. GW62

So true and so sweet

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Nice thoughts and good flow friend! Well done and keep it up 10/10 :)

i love the meaning behind this poem.. if i could give some humble advice though, i would say to maybe try to make it more metaphorical by having the 'life' do the actions.. so like from 'a story that has been told' to a story that tells itself, or remains untold... or 'sometimes it gets turned around and then other times its just like a flow' to sometimes it turns itself around while other time it likes to just flow.... but that's just me and not everyone thinks the same, but i do love this poem great job!

A good story this story of life you tell to fold unfold and grows less strife..thank you..iip