The life that we live
is just one big story
it has many climaxs
and many reasons
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What wisdom. I thought you were very young, but that piece of writing was filled with a wisdom born of age. You are either a genius or a very great soul that has a lot to give to the world. And the structure and presentation were just what they needed to be. All praise to you my dear. GW62
Nice thoughts and good flow friend! Well done and keep it up 10/10 :)
i love the meaning behind this poem.. if i could give some humble advice though, i would say to maybe try to make it more metaphorical by having the 'life' do the actions.. so like from 'a story that has been told' to a story that tells itself, or remains untold... or 'sometimes it gets turned around and then other times its just like a flow' to sometimes it turns itself around while other time it likes to just flow.... but that's just me and not everyone thinks the same, but i do love this poem great job!
A good story this story of life you tell to fold unfold and grows less strife..thank you..iip
A good story I really appreciate your poems and it make me know more about life and I am in good love with your story