Sunday, April 12, 2009

A Story Of Anger Comments

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I get angry at the world
because people do not love you as I wish them to.
A loves you;
A gender discriminator, he prefers your brother.
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James Mclain 12 April 2009

A sea of waves of anger forced to forever burst in the lap of passion... this is a very pure poem of concentrated intenesness..iip.. thanks you.

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it's a push no pull anger poem very good

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

an acrostic? hehe a very angry poem indeed but it is finely expressed great job

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