Wednesday, September 25, 2013

A Story Of A Girl Child........ Comments

Rating: 4.2

When she was born,, there was no celebration..
even there was a negative situation..
everyone was in sorrow and in tension..
just because she was a girl child..!
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shraddha shraddha the poetess
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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 June 2023

Great Dedication to a GIRL child, so very sad to read these things still happen now in traditional societes, where are The MOTHERS? She was a girl child too. TOP Marks for this brave and beautiful poem

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Prabhat 08 August 2019

Very nice and 💓 touching poem.

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Shruti 18 April 2019

A very real and emotional poem

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Gauri 16 April 2019

Very good

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Ishita 27 January 2019

Beautiful poem

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Saanvi negi 14 December 2018

I am so Happy from this poem. Tomorrow is my English exhibition l had resetated this poem

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Ayushi 04 December 2018

Heart touching lines

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Ramesh Rai 02 September 2014

Powerful as well as beautiful write.

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Aman Koul 28 May 2014

Tum awsm ho nd kbi b likhna mt chodna becoz i know what it feels lyk if sum1 is born to write.. Aman

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Gayatri Palande 13 April 2014

nice poems :) very inspiring and touch the heart.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 April 2014

a mom. a sister a wife.. without woman the world would be a lifeless desert. great write poetess.

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Yash Shinde 05 April 2014

..............reflects the nature of present society, grief of girl child.............lovely poem

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Indranil Bhaduri 24 March 2014

Very nice...lovely... more wanted from you.

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Bharti Chandwani 02 March 2014

A poem reflecting society....good work shraddha....in this age you write so well and thats too on social issue......excellent..keep writing..

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Rajesh Thankappan 01 March 2014

A nice poem with a happy ending. I hope with spread of education people stops discriminating against the girl child.

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Itai Oscar 28 February 2014

Bringing out what is happening in our society.... Great write!

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Suman Kumar Das 26 February 2014

a burning social issue has been pictured in distinctive way.........................liked it, Dear Shraddha! Good job. Keep moving. only suggestion to avoid minor grammatical error. May God always be with you!

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 22 February 2014

Well done girl child. Now you are also a poet. Hugznstuff.

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Prasanna Kumari 21 February 2014

good poem reflecting reality and giving hope.....

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Kanav Justa 02 February 2014

nice poem shraddha, , , this is a dark spot in indian society, ,

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