When she was born,, there was no celebration..
even there was a negative situation..
everyone was in sorrow and in tension..
just because she was a girl child..!
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I am so Happy from this poem. Tomorrow is my English exhibition l had resetated this poem
Tum awsm ho nd kbi b likhna mt chodna becoz i know what it feels lyk if sum1 is born to write.. Aman
a mom. a sister a wife.. without woman the world would be a lifeless desert. great write poetess.
..............reflects the nature of present society, grief of girl child.............lovely poem
A poem reflecting society....good work shraddha....in this age you write so well and thats too on social issue......excellent..keep writing..
A nice poem with a happy ending. I hope with spread of education people stops discriminating against the girl child.
Bringing out what is happening in our society.... Great write!
a burning social issue has been pictured in distinctive way.........................liked it, Dear Shraddha! Good job. Keep moving. only suggestion to avoid minor grammatical error. May God always be with you!
Well done girl child. Now you are also a poet. Hugznstuff.
nice poem shraddha, , , this is a dark spot in indian society, ,
Great Dedication to a GIRL child, so very sad to read these things still happen now in traditional societes, where are The MOTHERS? She was a girl child too. TOP Marks for this brave and beautiful poem