Friday, December 19, 2008
! ! ! A Story Of A Friend! ! ! Comments
Rating: ★3.0
'I found a love
while I was sitting
on a bench of a park
daydreaming
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Ravisankar Maitree
19 December 2008
Hi Kite remedy Nice your poem. I have same experience.
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7/21/2025 11:40:34 AM # 1.0.0
I liked the story and most of the lines. The only one I didn't like was the last one. It ended with a whimper, not a bang. The story perhaps ended that way, but the poem doesn't have to. GW62