Wednesday, June 24, 2009

A Story Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Twilight is here and the sun departs with calming beauty
Children bid it farewell with such joy and delight
That emit feelings of nostalgia from elderly onlookers
As their goodbye songs travel beyound the great lake
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. . 16 July 2009

Fantastic image you've painted here back when the gods walked this earth and their children listened. :)

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Eddie Frelford 16 July 2009

'When the children are so caught in the story And they lay their tongues to rest' this is class man, sound like the kids are transfixed and wrapped up in this world you've created, take it easy, eddie

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Leanna Ward 15 July 2009

amazing. check out mine.

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Caddoc Bryn 15 July 2009

i like this one best.. really good

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Twilight is here and the sun departs with calming beauty Children bid it farewell with such joy and delight That emit feelings of nostalgia from elderly onlookers........sun deaparts with calming beauty oh lovely describe.. beautiful dear..... read mine sun n son....everywhere, ...buterflies around, , mis i miss u..mary to marry and child

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Heidrun Dsouza 08 July 2009

hey good one.................a very good composition

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