Sunday, December 16, 2012

A Story Like No Other Comments

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Ours was a story
Of passion
Of secret
Of love
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Tiger Lily Love
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A Waltz For Zizi 16 June 2014

I'm not too fond about repetition in poetry.

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Alexis ... 23 December 2012

Bravo! ! ! I loved the repetition and of course the same stanza alla likes. Very very good job!

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Alla Simone 23 December 2012

Ours was a story Of having to let go of something When how we felt about each other Just wasn't enough Sooo true in too many cases. I lived it. Bravo. Poems like this are the reason you should NEVER stop writing.

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