Ours was a story
Of passion
Of secret
Of love
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Bravo! ! ! I loved the repetition and of course the same stanza alla likes. Very very good job!
Ours was a story Of having to let go of something When how we felt about each other Just wasn't enough Sooo true in too many cases. I lived it. Bravo. Poems like this are the reason you should NEVER stop writing.
I'm not too fond about repetition in poetry.