A Story Ended In Vain Comments

Nothing lasts longer than forever, Except feelings in a realm of an endless river, Treasuring the memories of a one who was almost dear, Endurance becomes sweetly painful, like the caress of that of a feather... ya nothing except sweet/bitter memory.. this is part of life....lovely poem....10

Great poem. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderfully conceived. Liked it. I rated it 10/10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.