A Story Begins Comments
You are like a tiny boat,
Sailing alone in the blue ocean
Seeking to hug your dream lover
Dipping yourself with intense emotion
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Every human life is by itself a unique story in itself...the joys and sorrows, successes and failures...
There is a certain intensity to this that I appreciate. Also, the title is engaging and the build up to the closure.. beautiful I would say. All the stages.. fluid and deep. Thanks for sharing.
Oh how I really love this very passionate write. A love as deep as the ocean. A story with a beginning and hopefully a happy ending. Loved it.
Woah d sudden storm kisses, how true! ! A creative romantic poem with a difrent twist. Kudos!
Yeap here at the ending appreciation's notes have been begun :) lovely romantic poem, brief but too deep..
Wonderful poem Indranil.Thus they lived happily.......Soothing note!
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Each line flows freely as an honest articulation.