Friday, October 9, 2009

A Story About A Boy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Down this dusty dry track,
There is a boy waiting for me.
He has a smile that every girl wants,
And owns all the land your eyes can see.
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Stella Andrews
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Nikunj Sharma 29 January 2010

Great poem....nice imagery....I am sure the boy transformed..to be kicked twice in the place could be painful....hahaha a... nice work stella

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Richard Post 25 October 2009

very nice. transformed a town. imagine that.

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Brooke Peterson 16 October 2009

Gave me gooosebumps! What a good story! ♥ ♥ ♥

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