Friday, March 4, 2016

A Story Comments

Rating: 4.5

An old man married a young lady,
He gave her everything!
Wealth and educated her very well;
However, along the line,
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Valsa George 05 March 2016

In the first place, the old man shouldn't have married a very young girl! She eventually deserted the old man and went after another man! Both of them here play a game of deceit! Quite a realistic write!

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M Asim Nehal 04 March 2016

Very true, Greed in human have no bounds and love is indeed blind....Nice poem...10+++

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