A Story Comments

nice attempt. story telling is not so easy in poetry.

Another beautifully written gem

A great story :) the story of your life, perhaps? It certainly seems to be the story of mine. Nice work :) -W

good 1... strong and impressive.

To be simple is a bliss.See our Defense Minister Mr.AK Antony, he never uses a watch.He uses simple dress.So, what? Be rational, Critically thinking.Read News papers and Magazines of different kinds. Observe people of different category and their life on your way.Your grace will inspire you to write well and neglect frowns and criticisms. Expect your confident poems of rhythm and rhythm. Practice some nursey rhymes(as a mould) to get a flow to poems. This story is very appealing.

Your on the threshold of all your dreams coming true with such sweetness and a powerful outlook on life! Love the lines........I am peeping through the glass whether it is night or day.

:) :) :) :) :) ..... Nicely explnd...

Golden flower set to bloom, your time is near, your time is soon. You will go far young lady. Great Write! ; -) Kelly.

Beautifully written..thoughts of a girl..or a woman... beautiful