Wednesday, August 31, 2011

A Story Comments

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A story that flavoured everyone’s life,
same story shared with the dawn and the night:
an old man of no story and no wife,
holds on to his cane and white hair with might.
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Mark Trajano
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Diana Rose Tolentino 02 September 2011

Subtle and powerful. As people grew old, they begin to wonder..has his life attained its purpose? But at the end of the day, he just have to enjoy what is left on his short life and made it fruitful. I wonder what your inspiration for this poem is. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. Diane

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