A Story Comments

Very well written and succeeds in crying out in a vivid, effective manner. Very sad situation and so true of too many children in this world of ours. Sometimes we cannot say that the world is even human. The animals take care of their young much better than many of us.

Very touching... I felt my heart ache for the poor child... thanks Athena :)

a story with good dialogue of the yearning mind towards the stubborn world out side...words subduing to nicely flowing lines...i give ten votes

The poignant tale of the human heart that suffers within though unwilling to make known to the outside world. A beautiful and thought provoking piece of creativity. Thanks, arya.