A Storm That Is My Peace Comments

Dear Tierra, You need heavy rain, lightning, thunder, and finally storm (His) “His Thunder my emotion, our everything” – the gist…. I can’t catch it Rhyme is good, of course. Are you talking about the earth and sky? Rgds Noor

Good Write at first I thought you were talking about Walking in a storm with is pretty cool once you're already all wet But then you twised it around And you were talking about his Storm With your emotions

Fantastic write.......... beautiful words presented simply and eloquently........