A Storm Is Coming Comments

And..... I am putting your name with pride on my fav poet list

Part 3. This is literature, Mohabeer, not just another poem. This should be Poem of the Day every day for several years. It has everything. Absolutely everything that defines a piece of writing as a piece of literature. A million 10s+++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list

Part 2. But you didn't leave it there and you could have... but you swung the tiller of this poem, and sailed it into deeper and darker waters- - you had wisdom to share about the dark side of life here on earth where there is always a storm coming- - ]Wind, rain, rum / Storm, blood shed and babies have all always been here / For the having, any way!

Part One. Your poem has left me breathless- -the lines about the coming poem were so spot on that I felt I should peer out the window to see if one were on its way.- -] The well had sunk deeper into a deserted and threatening silence- -]Old men gazed with fear and uneasiness at the sky / And shook their heads./ It was red, ominous and full of fears.- - ] The animals lowedrestlessly inthe sheds / As the village tucked itself behind closed doors and windows And waited.