A Storm Approaches Comments

A nice poem about the coming of heavy rain, a nature's way of ending a drought. Lovely. Always, I enjoy good poems about nature. Thanks for sharing.

TO MEET THE STORM I RACED./WE EMBRACED, /AND I DANCED IN ITS RAIN. This is so - ecstatic. Most people run and hide their heads when it rains, but YOU actively sought out the rain. Impatient for the experience, you couldn't wait for it to find you, you had to find it. There's an element of danger in this poem, as I'm sure your'e aware. For example, a lightning strike. But that danger just makes the embrace of the rain more exciting. And excitement is what your poem achieves!