A Stone Named Want Comments

Excellently & originally done; a fine mature piece of writing that speaks to the depths. Thank you.

Rebekah, you got talent, but like the boulder on my shoulder, burdens can be pushed away with will and pop pop fizz fizz what a relief it is.

n age old theme presented in a novel way.Theheavy stone is an excellent descruption of that aching need

this poem = greatly done. i can relate and i like it alot.

A beautiful poem Rebekah - I really enjoyed this and I think you have written it superbly with great melancholy. Steve