Thursday, June 16, 2005

A Stitch In Time Comments

Rating: 2.3

hands wrinkle before my eyes.
i turn them over,
palms facing me.
time passes quickly,
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Elsa Bear
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Raynette Eitel 16 June 2005

Elsa, you have captured how I often feel...but I am old, and you are young. Good job getting inside someone's head (or hands?) . You didn't waste any lines on trivialities and I admire that. Raynette

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