A Still Desire Comments

Life moves with, every breath, a desire stands still, eyes seek with each blink, ...always depends and seeks desire....and it also seeks more.....beautiful thought read mine desire.. thoughts and you ask more

beautiful poem, lovely expression

Felt-written words...though short speaks a lot...thanks

a nice work written in smart mode..

Love is a desire stands still, with the flow of time becomes stronger and stronger..... a paradox in almost everyone's life, Rafique. A good poem, well written and mild. Best Wishes Naseer

Beautiful, very well penned and flows smoothly!