Riveted are my mind's eyes
at the glitter of the stars
in the glistening lake of blue,
and wish to see in the skies
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A lovely detailing of your love, respect and closeness to your beloved father.... your utter desire to be with him..... it talks about the closest bonding..... loved it.
once again a poignant write, , , , your poems have that suff, , which makes the reader eyes wet with tears, ,
I believe unconditional and pure love never dies. The fact that we will not be able to speak to our loved one again is enough to make us feel vulnerable and helpless but death is not the end of life; it is only the body that perishes, the soul continues to live and your dad is still alive; alive in your memories, alive in whatever you do! ! ! You are his reflection! ! ! a sterling Man indeed he was! ! ! This is a great tribute! ! ! It has really touched me! ! !
the Man whose double's hard to find A father is a unique person, Moon amidst the stars, shining like silver. Great tribute.
A sterling man reminds me of my father, whom I have written many poems. He was always there for me no matter what. my hero. love your version Shahzia
A sterling man reminds me of my father, whom I have written many poems. He was always there for me no matter what. my hero. love your version Shahzia
A sterling man reminds me of my father, whom I have written many poems. He was always there for me no matter what. my hero. love your version Shahzia
Another beautiful memorial, not in bricks and mortar, but in love for a loving father from a dear daughter! This poem stands out in the conciseness of form and the intensity of genuine feelings! !
Heartfelt and lovely! You are blessed, Shahzia, to have had such a devoted father; he, to have sired such a loving, respectful and gifted child.
whom i always yearn to see whom i always love to talk whom my eyes do ever seek : ( nice poem!
genuine feelings and hurtful want ooze outa this poem....a fab ode to an equally fab father.... you got it going for so many i can say it with confidence... all of us who hv lost loving caring parenst KNOW what you are are at... v nice loved reading it cheers***
Such tributes have a charm of unique human relations... I hope my daughter will one day write like you about me... Special congrats for the apt diction you used.
Your father would be very proud of this trubute and the endless, edearing love that you hold for him - that he is never forgotten within the heart of his beloved daughter. A treasured write.
one may become grand parent or even great grand parents but none to replace one's parents! their voice gets heard constantly from within...
Beautiful, beautiful tribute to your father. Your poem has touched me deeply.
You are so wonderful how you loved your father. He will be in your heart forever.
Great pleasure to read such a great tribute to your father.he must be great.when loneliness sweeps us we do think of our loved ones so deep.Through the timelessness of misty windows, across the mysterious marshlands, in the hidden stretches of strange mountain paths we would be wanting for no one else but our dearest for they are accomplishers of our sense of love and care.a deep write.
a gem of a poem strung with freely flowing emotion!