Tuesday, November 11, 2008

A Stepping Stone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crossing the riverbed alone
The incompleteness of a dream
Pushes him forward
His head lifted towards the sky
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Alfred Ramos
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Anita Atina 16 November 2008

This poem flowed from an inspired place. Superbly moulded. A 10 from me!

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