A Step Closer To Death Comments

Love it! For some reason Rob Halford is singing these lyrics in my mind.

the title reminds me One step closer to the edge by Linkin Park movaffaq bashid

You have a lot of great idea, Most of your poems reflects your strong mind.. I appreciate most of your idea expressed in your poems.. Well done..dear!

Not a bad piece the last two lines really got me very well done

Death is the thing that all of us will face it a day. with out any doubts. The angel of death will come a day. Nice one

It was a dark but there is some sense of humor especially about the coke ahahah but shouldnt let the dark be your background, cheer some lights if today we die will we try to do good things now so try to do good things every second as we can because each breath we take and release, a step closer we to die ....Again about the note, i think people nowadays always prefer The F*** things why need this, better we not make it as a culture Nader we are too overwhelmed by this bad junk things...but this poem has good sound just keep it up_Soul