Monday, December 4, 2006
A Steady Squall Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Take my hand and let us run.
For my heart is but a poorly stitched kite,
and you…
you, my dear are the mighty gale,
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Sebastian Sandok
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Malcolm Blake-lawson
08 December 2006
Superb! Made me feel as high as a kite; a perfect allegory on love and who controls it.
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
05 December 2006
Sterling metaphoric measure, Sebastian...Well crafted piece & astutely delivered FJR
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7/19/2025 2:04:20 PM # 1.0.0
I like your metaphor. Relationships are certainly tenuous and can be stormy.