A Starry Night Comments

A beautiful star-lit poem with a 'star-lit sound'. Susie.

Ya know I'm trying here. And you are not making it easy.

And here I thought I was being nice to you. My child. But on second thought, I do have enough children in my stable. : -))

P.S. I'm not YOUR child. There I said ONE thing. I don't need to sign we both know who I am.

no comment because I promised a wise poet that I wouldn't with you anymore so I shall not. though it irks me so to not be able to say what I want right now. But alas I shall contain myself. Lylyanna

Lulyanna, I think it made the flow as great as it is. Have patience, my child. You will get there. Best H

My soul daring to roam flew up on gentle wings, past castles of strange kings, pretending to go home. you made a half way decent comment on one of mine so I guess i'll try to make one on one of your's that stanza didn't seem to fit but you may've done that on purpose but I'm just saying that it messed up the nice flow you had going in your poem. There now we're even. Lylyanna(a poet!)

Nice work - beautiful imagery here. Hugs, CJ

Very calming poem...I loved the last stanza.