If I were a Starlit Night
I would paint the sky
In darkest light
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Words are flowing like river and imageries created by the silksmith's touch, a wonderful poem, Indeed.100+++
'If I were a Starlit Night I would paint the sky In darkest light' Fantastic..
you made me feel how it was to listen to the earth the way i once used to in a horrible period in my life but it gifted me the key to the mind sets of others
the poem appearing in gold and silver make the starlit sky more beautiful filling our heart with awe....
Such a nice way to weave words as if decrating the entire universe in a hue of vibrant yet shaded thoughts
Fantastic passion of being, overwhelming the readers idea. Imagination gets a new dimension toexpand its wings. Thanks a lot............................pranab k c.....................................10+
Fantastic passion of being, overwhelming the readers idea. Imagination gets a new dimension toexpand its wings. Thanks a lot............................pranab k c.....................................10+
The stars shine softly on the canvass of your being, silken in flow, gurgling she flows, like the stream of purity, through the intergalactic spaces of positions, emotions, beliefs baggage. Nothing else remains but the shine of the stars and the gurgle of your poem. What a master stroke.
Dear Louise, Forgot to mention that I recite poetry on the streets of London to make a living; with your kind permission, I'd like to add 'A Starlit Night' to my repertoire (with full credit being given to yourself, of course) - please let me know if this is ok with you? :) Best regards, Mark (London)
Wow....wonderful lyrics....Keep up the high scale of measure...
This is really lovely - poetry the old-fashioned way :) My compliments, Mark (London)
Such a beautiful poem! ! I look forward to reading more of your work. Kudos!
This poem is fantastic, it is has such beautiful verses that captured me from the very first part. well done! HBH
Absolutely beautiful portrayal of the moods of the Universe reflected in the night sky..a favorite poem..thank you!