Wednesday, February 15, 2006

A Star With My Name On It Comments

Rating: 5.0

This morning's passed so peacefully this morning
the time has come, I must be on my way
I only hope that when the fightings over
I'll be able to return to you one day
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Charles M Moore
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Sandra Fowler 06 June 2006

The true poet must be willing to give himself away in words. How generously you have done this in your beautiful poem. I am sure there will always be a star with your name on it, Charles. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Esther Leclerc 19 April 2006

Often, I think about men and war through the centuries, all of the loss and all of the stories we don't know. This poem brings out the truth that a good love CAN carry on through hardship... Thanks for the beautiful moment. Esther

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Duncan Wyllie 26 March 2006

The closeness of such a loving family during the midst of war. A star symbolizing a heavenly connection. Wonderful writing from a wonderful poet. Love Duncan

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Patricia Gale 16 March 2006

Charles, A romantic write, that speaks to the heart of loss.Brushed my a touch of sadness. Patricia

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Bridgid Patrick 28 February 2006

This is a very sad, yet sweet poem...who said romance was dead? ..x

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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