Monday, September 3, 2012

A Star Is Born Comments

Rating: 4.2

A Moslem, a Sikh, a Christian and a Jew
Came together to debate a few
Who pleases his wife the most?
Before or after feasting on roast
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 10 September 2012

This kept me giggling while reading. I like this narrative way of bringing out your lines and posing the problem between and among characters. Your last line is a great summation.

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