Thursday, February 13, 2014

A Star In Your Life... Comments

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The fresh and young grape vines,
Spread on your tender heart loving,
As the day and night of the earth,
I stay in your mind as your twin soul.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Rajesh Thankappan 15 February 2014

As the roots of the banyan, let our love be strong, Singing the softest tunes, just audible to us both, A fantastic poem. The last two lines too were very catchy. I have read your poems for the first time today and look forward to read all of them.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 February 2014

As the roots of the banyan, let our love be strong, Let love be strong. Thank you.

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Lorraine Colon 13 February 2014

Lovely poem. When we love someone, what wonderful thoughts form in our minds. Words that were elusive come to the forefront to describe our emotions. Even if a loved one is far away, it is a most satisfying feeling just to think of them.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 February 2014

we are tied together, good writing my dear, I like it.

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