A birthday poem for my wife
A star fell from heaven
Into my arms last night
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David, my brother this poem is a delight to read and what a lovely tribute to the woman you love. I love this David.....
Very nice indeed all the way from heaven so its keeps for you enjoyed my first time at your page++++++10 regards
this is a very romantic piece again, David! You have pictured this very well in words. You did justice to your wife in expressing your love to her! Oh, i really love this, that i want to embrace all the words and dream and dream!
A wonderful tribute to your lovely wife, your heart if full of love for this treasured gift from God. Isn't marvelous how God works, love this poem David.--Melvina--
How did I miss this one: O) .....she must love it....your words are so powerful and full of love David: O)
Yes very romantic indeed. Your wife must have been moved with your words.
Oh this place is full of romantics, including me (and you!) well expressed David, going into my faves. Lisa
Such a beautiful tribute poem that speaks volumes of a Great Love that will never end.You wrote a poem that I am sure your wife would be proud of... Great work.Sad but Great! Take care of U, Shelley
Absolutely magnificent~~~~~~~~~~how fortunate you are to have found each other~~~~~~~~~I know you know, how rare such a love is.....I wish your wife a belated 'Happy Forever Young Day, ' and I wish you both many, many more years of love shared together.............(tears here....) marci.m.
Quite lovely David, another wonderful tribute to your precious wife. This poem is touching, expressive and fine. Naturally a big (10) from me, Thankyou for sharing David---Melvina---
David this was a very beautiful piece of poetry, it touched my heart deeply. your wife is lucky to have some one as you to write such a poem to her, but your probley saying that it is you who are lucky, a great poem.
A star fell from heaven right onto this page, wonderful, expressive..AWESOME! Love duncan x
Did she love it my friend, i like your Style... david... seems Familiar just Can’t think where i have seen it before... Thanks for sharing...10
A rising angel...and ever shining star...true lovers response......Thanks