Tuesday, July 21, 2015

A Star Among Many Comments

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I am but a ray of light
On a warm sunny day,
I am but an autumn leaf
Softly blown away.
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Vlad Mutuleanu
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Liliana ~el 21 July 2015

I really enjoyed reading this! We are not everything, but we are beautiful and significant parts of a bigger picture and grander scheme. Thank you.

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Vlad Mutuleanu 28 July 2015

I like the way you see this poem, in that positive way when you feel significant among many parts that drive the universe. I dont view it the same, writing this I realised how insignificant I really am in a too big universe. This goes to show how free poems are to interpret

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