Sunday, December 10, 2006

A Star! Comments

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A star shone out so very bright,
Not just a little, simple one,
But one so special in our sight,
A new life had begun.
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Ernestine Northover
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Walterrean Salley 26 November 2016

(A Star! by Ernestine Northover.) **The star that marked the birth of Jesus.

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Andrew Blakemore 02 March 2008

Let us never forget the true meaning of Christmas. Lovely work. Andrew x

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Geoff Warden 19 December 2006

Heartfelt poem Ernestine........truly the message of the season shines in these words................well done

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R H 11 December 2006

A warm and uplifting poem Ernestine. The way you have echoed the first part of the first line in each stanza really strengthens the image. Beautifully written. Justine

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 10 December 2006

serenity in words. quite beautiful... -Eila

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Patricia Gale 10 December 2006

A beautiful peaceful piece, wonderful.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 December 2006

Ernestine>>>Now this is the Christmas that my parents brought me up on... My mom wrote a tad, but had no interest in Poetry, so she never wrote something like this, so vivid & mellifluous...But her verbal stories always painted a picture, as a child, i sware i thought i could reach-up & touch! i'll just bet you could do that too, young lady....Beautiful conveyence.... Frank

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Duncan Wyllie 10 December 2006

Peacefull and serene Ernestine, lovely pictures Love duncan X

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