Sunday, September 20, 2020

A Standstill Comments

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A breakdown, a standstill,
The dynamic brio is held still,
The path ahead is blurred,
Not a chance to be lured,
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J Sheba Anandhi
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 October 2020

The aspirations are despondent, Hard to observe any deportment, Now I am an insipid resident Experiencing tedious internment, fine endings of the poem makes it attractive. tony

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Terry Craddock 28 September 2020

I wrote the poem 'Idyllic Home Slides Off Rails Into Road Ruts' inspired by the poem 'A Standstill' by the poet J Sheba Anandhi and dedicated to J Sheba Anandhi.

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Terry Craddock 20 September 2020

'The once idyllic abode Is at present frozen and cold.' transformation sudden unexpected chills

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 September 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, J Sheba A. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 September 2020

Beautiful poem. Loved the way you have spilled your thought. Thanks for sharing.

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